Asking for critique for 2021 USC SCA production MFA application

[zzhang]

Hi everybody. Hope everyone is well during the pandemic.
My name is Peter and I'm applying for usc sca's mfa production spring admission.
I finished the first draft of my PS and if anyone is interested to give a critique, please do!

 

[WriterGirl33]

Hi everybody. Hope everyone is well during the pandemic.
My name is Peter and I'm applying for usc sca's mfa production spring admission.
I finished the first draft of my PS and if anyone is interested to give a critique, please do!

I would be willing to look at it

 

[zzhang]

I would be willing to look at it

DM sent!

 

[addik]

Hey!

I don't have much to do with lockdowns still in place in my country, so I'd be willing to take a look at it too!

 

[zzhang]

Hey!

I don't have much to do with lockdowns still in place in my country, so I'd be willing to take a look at it too!

DM sent!

 

[green-scarf]

I'm happy to take a look too if you want another set of eyes!

 

[acsiv]

Hey Pete, I've written my fair share of personal statements and would be happy to take a look if it's not too late !

 

[Homanath]

Hi everybody. Hope everyone is well during the pandemic.
My name is Peter and I'm applying for usc sca's mfa production spring admission.
I finished the first draft of my PS and if anyone is interested to give a critique, please do!

I will be happy to share my thought !!!

 

[zzhang]

Hey guys, thanks for all the help offered! I submitted my application already, so, fingers crossed!

 

[Chris W]

Hey guys, thanks for all the help offered! I submitted my application already, so, fingers crossed!

Good luck!!!

 

[Frankie Bones]

I’m happy to give it a look as well!

 

[Frankie Bones]

I’m happy to give it a look as well!

Oh wait ooops never mind

 

[Chris W]

Oh wait ooops never mind

Ha. There are other people asking for advice too in other threads I believe if you want to help them.

I should probably figure out a way to make it so that it is more apparent that advice is no longer needed on a thread.

 

[Frankie Bones]

Thanks, Chris! Sounds good.

And my offer to the OP still stands, although I think that (me giving feedback on something that he can't change) could possibly lead to more mental anguish than would be beneficial at this point .

A bonus tip for mental sanity: Once your application is in, completely put it out of your mind! Otherwise, you will drive yourself partly crazy (like I did), wondering "should I have added this, or that?" Just let go and let God, as they say!

 

[Rabia]

Hey Pete, I've written my fair share of personal statements and would be happy to take a look if it's not too late !

Hey. Would you willing to take a look at mine? This is the first time I'm applying for an international program. I have no.idea what I'm doing.