Can I get some feedback for my media sample of my portfolio?

[AM6758]

I am applying to some big schools as a transfer film major (USC,NYU,Chapman, etc.). I don't have time to create a completely new film for some of my portfolios, but have some films I made for some classes a couple months ago. Do you think this film will be enough to submit? (the maximum for most schools is 5 min and this is under that.)

The film is a short documentary on my sister who is an animator.

Here is the link:
Film 2, Ava Moslehi

I appreciate any feedback!

 

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Can't open the link.

 

[AM6758]

Sorry! Here is the new link:

 

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I liked it!
Have you heard anything from the schools you applied to? I’m a transfer student too, and I’m still waiting for decisions.

 

[AM6758]

I liked it!
Have you heard anything from the schools you applied to? I’m a transfer student too, and I’m still waiting for decisions.

Thank you! I got waitlisted for Chapman, still waiting to hear back from USC, LMU, and UCLA. What about you?