Need Feedback on My Personal Statement

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Hi everyone!
I'm currently working on my screenwriting MFA application for Fall 2025, at this moment I need some feedback on my personal statement.
I read through some of the "good" personal statements I can find online, and most of them seem to not center around film, I'm afraid that mine centered around film and screenwriting way too much.
This is my first ever draft, I have not proofread it with others at this moment, any comments/feedback/criticism would be very much appreciated!
Also, English is not my first language, so you might find the writing a bit clumsy sometimes, but I will fix it later.
Thanks!
 

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