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Aanish

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Hi, I'm looking to get some opinions on a couple of short scripts I wrote. I have two in mind that I'd like to get some input on. I'll gladly read your script and provide feedback in return.
Both of my scripts are about 20-25 pages in length, you could ready either one and that'd be fine.
The logline for each of them is given below-
1) Dyad- On noticing inconsistencies within his life, man struggles to retain his being while a dark force threatens to wipe him from existance.
It's an action/sci-fi movie
2) Redwater Citizen-A frustrated vigilante steps out in the field one last time to complete his mission, and save his city.
This one is more of an action/thriller.
Please get back to me if you'd like to swap scripts and any of this sounds interesting to you.
 
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