Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback yesterday/today! I'll return the favor this weekend! Sorry about the delay - I'm still in college and I'm in the battles of midterm season :(
@sharkb8 - USC/Chapman/BU have accepted me so far (not sure if you were interested in these schools though). If...
Thank you for all of these notes! I definitely don't think I fleshed out the story enough to answer most of them, so again thank you for bringing them to light. :)
Thank you so much! Was there anything you think you would've liked to see more out of the scene?
Yeah. The prompt was to have two people stuck in a car and for the scene to demonstrate a change in their relationship. I believe the page limit was 5 but I wanted to keep it as short as possible -...
Hey there!
I also wanted to echo Manwitch's and Eddy's notes. I read all of your scripts, and they all struggle with the same things:
- Your characters do a lot of talking but not a lot of showing. I know exactly what's going on inside their heads, but only because you spell it out for me...
I applied for dramatic writing but he told me that about the production program in terms of notifying applicants (he said it as a side note in our conversation)
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