Honestly I hope so too, because in reading it over, you really are a good writer, definitely smarter than me! A little bit dark, but dark witty humor is great when done well and I think you have talent. I just don't know if the essay was exactly the right time and place for it.
...that being said, "carcass consuming kitty imaginings" hahahah that was nice or the moist effects of your caddish artistry! what?! I mean you obviously have balls, maybe you just need to learn now to better adjust them
...and the too, to, two is priceless even though I messed them up in my earlier post! In a lot of ways it's like a dark woody allen humor or a darker Wes Anderson, Paul Thomas Anderson style. I don't know if you're a director, but you're definitely a writer regardless of your gpa. So admittance or no admittance I hope you don't stop writing
Oh and if you don't get in, it might be no fault of your own, the professor just might not be on your level because damn you use some big words! Maybe you should have been an A-S-T-R-O-N-A-U-T.... I loved that part and all your different desires that culminated in you realizing that you are a writer. I can relate. But I do disagree with you, I don't think creative inspiration manifests itself through negative emotions, at least not the emotions that effectively communicate or connect to the reader/viewer. I'll use your essay as an example. In my opinion everything you wrote with the exception of the last paragraph and the last statement "I have no choice" was all a big FU to the reader, the professors who we all have to try and impress, the world, your doubt and everyone who has doubted you. But the last paragraph, now that was all heart. It was there that I think your true emotions showed and it was positive. Everything else was smart and funny and witty if you could keep up, but it had no heart. That's what I really connected to and thats the place I think you should continue to write from. Just some 2 cents and a nickel from a stranger over the internet
