USC Personal Statement feedback

[ashjupiterw]

Hello! I am looking for feedback on my personal statement for USC SCA. Thank you so much!

 

[ashjupiterw]

I can attach or email the personal statement to you! Whatever is the best! I really need feedback ASAP!!!!!

 

[scaldwellkerson]

I'm not sure if you've gotten a response but maybe we can do a personal statement exchange?

 

[ashjupiterw]

I'm not sure if you've gotten a response but maybe we can do a personal statement exchange?

yes that will be great! here is mine:

 

[scaldwellkerson]

Ok great, I'll take a look.

 

[scaldwellkerson]

yes that will be great! here is mine:

Would you like me to respond with notes here or send you a message privately?

 

[ashjupiterw]

Would you like me to respond with notes here or send you a message privately?

Would you like me to respond with notes here or send you a message privately?

You can send them privately! Thank you so much!

 

[Luckysharon]

Hey! I read your ps, it's one of the most inspiring ones that I have ever read. Congratulations! I love your story, hope you could be accepted by your dream school! I just feel like maybe you could show more aspects about your artistic goals, styles and creative background because I could not know about that part in your ps. Also, I'm very willing to read your other writing materials if you would like to share with me in private!