I’ve come from a lot of prose writing and once I finally decided to do my film app I yk needed to screen write. Very big learning curve obviously, I’ve been reading a lot of screen plays but it’s def whipping my ass. For the USC screenwriting program I was wondering if I could get some advice/feedback on what I completed for the second dialogue? Thank you to anyone who wants to help I hope yall have a good day 
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