Graduate Application Consulting from Award-Winning Columbia Writer/Director

[Pendragon]

A successful MFA application needs strong writing, both the personal essay and in your storytelling work. I'm here to consult on both, to help applicants interested in their top programs create unstoppable applications. If your program accepts films as part of the application, I'm here to give you my feedback as a working director on that element as well. Your application is a complex and elegant knot. Every string should be closely twined, dovetailing and reinforcing every other.

I was accepted to Brown and Columbia. Since then, I've been a jury prize winner of the Austin Film Festival for feature screenplay. I've had a script on the Black List. I've directed a dozen award winning shorts, and I've funded, directed and profitably sold my first feature film, which was recommended in the New York Times among other press. My second feature film is currently going to market.

If you're passionate about writing or filmmaking, I want to help you build those practical skills you'll need to stand out from the crowd. Everyone has a unique voice, and developing it is the key to creating compelling work – as an MFA applicant, and in your career beyond.

 

[zk-writer-01]

NEED ADVICE​

How much can you alter the film prompts for Columbia's MFA Screenwriting application? I am sticking to the main details (time, location, age, relationships) but I want to change a few small details for my individual story, is that ok???

Mainly does the 2nd individual in the story HAS to be human?

Columbia film prompts (2-3pgs):

EXT. AMUSEMENT PARK – NIGHT
Alone in the open cabin of a ferris wheel, the Young Woman is frightened to hear the entire ride screech, then slow to a complete stop. Voices from below shout assurances that the problem will be fixed in a few minutes...but things get even worse when she turns to see the person sitting in the cabin hanging opposite her own.

INT. DEPARTMENT STORE – DAY
As the Teenager scans the clothing racks for something to buy, he’s startled to see what looks like someone hastily stuffing merchandise into their backpack. He looks for a salesperson or a security guard - but just then, the person slips away. He follows.

 

[Pendragon]

Hi zk- They're interested to see your command of good storytelling by showing characters with clear motivations, conflicts, and relationships. I would advise focusing on that. If changing your second character to a non-human animal (or an alien, or an elf?) serves that purpose, that's fine, but my sense from these prompts is you'll get more out of them by giving your second character a voice, dialogue, and their own goal. Good luck!

 

[rozvrio]

Hey Zk, is there any way I could get an opinion from you on my material, although I have already submitted. Please kindly let me know thank you so much!